This should fix things . . . hopefully?

You type "Put your skirts down." "That should fix it," you think. How wrong you are.

Instead of returning to normal, the mesmerized women all begin removing their skirts and dropping them to the floor. Those who are wearing dresses have a little more difficulty, but they manage to reach behind and unbutton or unzip their dresses, allowing them to slip right off.

Mall security guards rush in, responding to a report of some women exposing themselves in public. They are shocked to discover that there actually A COUPLE HUNDRED women exposing themselves in public. A pretty young saleswoman at the Gordon jewelry store pulls off her red dress in front of a shocked engaged couple (the bride-to-be was unaffected by your device because she was wearing jeans). One 20-year-old man who was walking around with his girlfriend can be seen frantically trying to get her to put her plaid skirt back on. Other men who had been walking around with their girlfriends, wives, daughters, etc., also try with tremendous embarrassment to cover up their female companions.

"Oh, #$%^," you curse silently. "I've got to be more careful how I phrase my commands."

Thinking quickly, you try typing "Cancel my last two commands." Instantly, all of the disrobed women snap out of their spell, realizing with utter humiliation that everyone is staring at their underwear. They put their clothes back on hurriedly. Several of them are questioned by the mall security guards, but none have any answers for what just happened.

You decide it would be a good idea for you to leave as inconspicuously as possible. You stand up and exit, carrying with you the odd device that caused this mess.

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