Unbearable

The Pink Knight spiders her hand up and down between your belly and ribs. Suddenly, she quickly darts it over your side. You explode into helpless giggles. "No - no not there!" you manage to gasp out.

The knight grins evilly. "Are your sides a bad spot?" She starts tickling you down your left flank, starting just beneath the ribs and moving in little circles, slowly approaching you hips, all the while wriggling her fingers, poking and squeezing. The more you beg, the more intense the tickling becomes. You're hoping and praying that she will somehow miss *the spot,* but you know there's no chance of that.

And then it happens: her fingers make contact with your sweet spot. The area an inch above your left hip, a little towards the back, has always been the most unbearably ticklish spot on your whole body. (Well, it's mirrored on the right - at least the knight only has one hand free!)

"No! No, ANYWHERE but-" you try to beg, but you erupt into laughter before you can get the words out. The evil smirk on the knight's face makes it clear she has no intention of stopping.

On and on, she keeps torturing the terribly ticklish spot, as you laugh and wriggle and gasp for air.

"Remember," she says nonchalantly, "all you need to do to get me to stop is say "Mercy, my Lady." She underscores the words with a teasing kneading motion that makes you howl in ticklish agony.

At this point, you don't care about your dignity or your pride. You cannot stand this another second. You take a deep gasp of air and start "Mer-"

But with a grin, the knight digs in her fingers, and you lose your voice to a bout of laughter.

"Merc-"

Again, her quick fingers prevent you from getting the words out.

Time and time again, you try to admit defeat, try to beg for mercy, but the knight cuts you off my stepping up the tickling to a point where you lose the facility for speech.

You'll never get the words out. And she'll keep tickling and tickling *that spot.*

*Nothing* could be worse than this.

Or could it?

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